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3. Title comes 1^st because of the MLA format which out an author and the quotations are because of being an article

4. When they published it was 1^st in an article, they also published a website where there is additional information, so they need to put in in two different sections to show the different locations with italic font.

5 the 1^st date is when they published the information on the site. The second citation is the location of the information either book, internet. Journal. The 3^rd citation is when you pulled or looked at the information from the site

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“Is 25 the new cut-off point for adulthood?” Lucy Wallis. BBC Magazine News.23 September 2013. Article online

 “What are the effects of alcohol on the brain?” Anthony Dekker D.O. Director of Ambulatory Care and Community Health at Phoenix Indian Medical Center July 26, 1999. Web site

“Drugs, the brain, and behavior: the pharmacology of abuse and dependence”, John Brick, Carlton Erickson. New York: The Haworth Medical Press, c1998. Book

The Human Frontal Lobes and Frontal Network Systems: An Evolutionary, Clinical, and Treatment Perspective. Hoffmann, Michael. Article.2013 scholar article

chapter 5 and 8

English 102 Students, work in small groups discuss your research in process: What have you found, what challenges are you encountering, and where do you go from here?  Help each other out with suggestions or questions.  Continue looking for peer-reviewed journal articles for your topic(s). For Tuesday, read Bedford Ch. 5 & 8, and compile Research Blog Entries.

well I noticed that most of the information is common knowledge due to the fact that most of the people who work in the field are very clear with this topic and other subjects that would be close to this. when looked at the sites I noticed that most of them had very similar information with very close cited pages, in which led back to a couple main sites with a lot of the same information. I think it would be hard to debate, only because no matter how far and deep I looked I found the same thing over and over. I have contacted some experts in this matter and hope to have some one else bring their ideas to the table
I feel that this topic might be redundant, since most of the sites talk about the same thing over and over

chapter 6 and chapter 7 taking notes and manging informatuon

when making notes making sure that the notes are close to the topics

• detailed and itemized
• in order and organized
• tagging and labeling using catch phrases
• grouping( taking notes
• visualize and making the same clustering or mapping techniques
• downloading all of your information and making sure that you use the correct notations
• making sure that the biography is in alphabetical order
• when taking notes make sure that you compare resources
• use directly quotes the way they are found, not putting in other words.
• using proper quotations when sharing the experiences  to paint a picture or sup[ports main idea and when referring to ideas with witch they disagree

5 sources 5 cited resources

Dager, Alecia D., et al. "Functional Magnetic Resonance Imaging ( Fmri) Response To Alcohol Pictures Predicts Subsequent Transition To Heavy Drinking In College Students." Addiction 109.4 (2014): 585-595. Academic Search Premier. Web. 6 Oct. 2015



Wurdak, Mara, et al. "Hazardous Alcohol Levels In Adolescents Are Underestimated By Barkeepers And Security Personnel." European Journal Of Pediatrics 171.12 (2012): 1787-1792. Academic Search Premier. Web. 6 Oct. 2015

 

Rossow, Ingeborg, et al. "Effect And Process Evaluation Of A Norwegian Community Prevention Project Targeting Alcohol Use And Related Harm." Contemporary Drug Problems 38.3 (2011): 441-466. Academic Search Premier. Web. 6 Oct. 2015.

 

 

Jackson, Kristina M. "Progression Through Early Drinking Milestones In An Adolescent Treatment Sample." Addiction 105.3 (2010): 438-449. Academic Search Premier. Web. 6 Oct. 2015

 

 

Meng-Jinn, Chen, Joel W. Grube, and Paul J. Gruenewald. "Community Alcohol Outlet Density And Underage Drinking." Addiction 105.2 (2010): 270-278. Academic Search Premier. Web. 6 Oct. 2015

 

King, Serena M., et al. "Parental Alcohol Dependence And The Transmission Of Adolescent Behavioral Disinhibition: A Study Of Adoptive And Non-Adoptive Families." Addiction 104.4 (2009): 578-586. Academic Search Premier. Web. 6 Oct. 2015.

research 5 questions

List of 5 requirements for the final paper

1.    Making sure that paper is your own, in your own words

2.   Making sure that the paper has the proper amount of words (3000).

3.   Employ the correct grammar, punctuation and MLA formatting (including the correct citations.

4.   Employ the correct parenthetical citations, a work cited page, and coupies signal phrases to avoid plagiarism

5.   Having the correct sources and implication of 10 or more high creditable sources including 5 peer review journal articles.

List 5 requirement of success on your final paper

·       Proper sleep

·       Peer reviews

·       Time management

·       Organization

·       Being on time, show up  early

·       Going to the writing center if needed and making appointments with them as early as possible

·       Asking questions for clarification

 

 

 

 

 

Notes

Good topic. I would need to have a lot of resources to back up topic. They would like to read the paper when I am finished.

What does this look like? If it was changed would it make a differences?

 

 

 

5 research questions

1.   Would it really matter or change anything?

2.   How would it effect the sale of liquor and the tax of the local government if the idea came in to effect

3.   Would children seem to find it elsewhere?

4.   Would there be more crime in attempt to achieve their goal, which is getting drunk

5.   Does the data show a rise of productivity of a person if and when they don’t drink or drug?

6.   Since everyone is different when they grow up and their frontal cortex could be fully devopled at 25, could they drink now and would that affect them in the long haul.

 

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       

chapter 1

Based on the information that was extracted from chapter 1. I noted the keys words in the chapter that pertain to our current weeks work. This portion of the chapter helps the writer identify main topics and subjects that have a strong correlation to the topic, my position, and an over view or reflection of the topic and transition from one idea to the next, in chronological order. When I was reading chapter 1, I noticed how they stated in the book in chapter 1, when you use your own understanding of a conversation to help myself to become a better writer. When doing a research paper I would agree that finding a subject that sparks my interest, would assist in the motivation of looking for sources and making sure that the sources are engaged in the same topic that I picked 

gather 3 potenial sources with page 92 questions

http://www.sciencedaily.com/releases/2013/11/131119193624.htm

 

Journal Reference:

1. Ester M. Nakamura-Palacios, Rodrigo S. M. Souza, Maria P. Zago-Gomes, Adriana M. F. de Melo, Flávia S. Braga, Tadeu T. A. Kubo, Emerson L. Gasparetto. Gray Matter Volume in Left Rostral Middle Frontal and Left Cerebellar Cortices Predicts Frontal Executive Performance in Alcoholic Subjects. Alcoholism: Clinical and Experimental Research, 2013; DOI: 10.1111/acer.12308 

      2. the information on the website provides in great detail of the side effects and they demonstrated the cause and effect in great length and an over all performance of the body after use. they utilizes the cause and correlation from people who use and don't use. they paint a picture of what its like for a alocholic, they even help with some  research  that will help relatives of those suffering from this condition to better understand some of the problems that the addicts and alcoholic sufferers from, giving them the chance to put them self's in the other persons shoes for a second.
      3. I would say that its very supported and very nurtured throughout the site and the sources have medical backing with Clinical & Experimental Research, as proof. I believe that the argument is more of statement which doesn't require a response, because of this it would be hard to argue that Alcoholism doesn't effect the frontal cortex.
     4. the author has a lot of research and data with proof, it would be really hard to disprove her argument. Its very easy to accept her argument that was presented
     5. when reading the website, I noticed that the site is very short compared to other websites, its very compact and very informative, its straight to the point and doesn't stray from the topic. On one paragraph they used some results that  will be published in the April 2014, which is very recent. this doesn't change my thought of using this site.
     6. I would say that it derives from a medical standpoint with medical definitions and MRI images that have great value to the sources and it usefulness to my paper i would use this with out a second thought.
      7. when looking at the genres I noticed that we as humans still use most of the currents definitions, I would make sure that i would provide examples to make sure that I am not changing the genre.
      8  This sources has several prime examples and a strong source to help me with my purpose I personally don't think I will have any problems while using this site in my paper.
      9. I am very likely to use this site and sources in the website for a source cited page





     1.  A. I. Leshner, "Science-Based Views of Drug Addiction and Its Treatment," Journal of the American Medical Association 282 (1999): 1314~1316
(jama.jamanetwork.com/article.aspx?articleid=191976).

     2. This site offers  information on why people do drugs and the nature of addiction, Its very important to know the reason why people use and the understanding of addiction in a real like form, making it tangible would give a different feel to the paper, with a proper understanding and some history, implication of the five W's; what?, when?, where?, why?, who? into the paper giving it some back bone.

    
     3. I don't think its very well supported, but i do like the information of understanding the nature addiction to help show the correlation of people who might be at risk.
    
     4. What I learned is that when the word addiction came around people thought that it was the process of taking lots of drugs, later they realized that its more of the impulsive behavior that becomes uncontrollable over time, which leads people to seek and use drugs or alcohol.

    5. This article was published in 1999, due to that information I personally believe that its too old to use. when you look at the types of new drugs on the market and other types of ways to indigestion them and the effects that they have on people I would prefer to use another site.

    6. I would have to say that the medical jargon is hard to understand you almost need a PH.D to understand the terms and definitions. I think that you should break things down enough to help the readers really grasp the concepts.
  
   7. I think that it speaks to a certain crowd pertaining certain information, I don't think that most people would read this source to get a full understanding of addiction and the effects that it causes. I would in slang terms dumb it down to reach the readers and give them the clear idea of the topics

  8. I don't think this would be a good source to use in the my project, Its not very long and its some what hard to read.
 
  9. I will not be using this site or source in my paper.




1. Source: Frontier C, Keane TM, Leritz E, et al. Widespread Effects of Alcohol on White Matter Microstructure. Alcoholism: Clinical & Experimental Research. 2014.

2. I noticed that some of the information on this site is almost common knowledge, I have seen most of this information in classes at the college level. I have heard many teachers and professors lecture on this type of information so i believe it to be true and accurate.

3.  The line of argument is so strong in this website that I would have a hard time arguing against it. I like the personal stories of the gentleman on the site, if you saw it you would understand personal stories of bouts of alcoholism makes it real.

4. I learned that drinking beyond the age of 50 can cause permanent brain chemistry to change, it is  possible if the recovery of tissue of the left inferior frontal gyrus with maintained abstinence in those alcoholics who successfully stopped drinking prior to their fifth decade," Fortier said
5. I would have to say that the date is fairly new and I would use it, its with in a two year mark and very informational.
6. I think that the person did some research, I believe that they really looked up good data to implicate in their online site.
7. I dont see a problem in this piece of information, other than it could be longer and broken down more in understandable words.
8. I think that this piece would work and show data that would argue my point, not only is alcohol bad but it destroys regardless of age. When you have long periods of no (USE) you will heal at some level
9. I will use this sources